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Monday 20 February 2012

Script

We reviewed our old script (its still there if you want to look at it). After reviewing it we decided that it was just too happy for a thriller in the end, and it didn't fit in too much with our beach scene... So we've created a new one... which can still be filmed at nymans. So without much further ado... The Script!!! P.S. in regards to the shooting scene... we won't see the gun... we'll just hear the sound...

The script for the second scene in Nymans Gardens walking through the old house that is the only dialouge sequence-






Scene 2 – Block 1 of filming (Nyman’s Gardens)



Scene begins in damaged area of the house in Nyman’s gardens 3 friends are walking into the damaged area through a small archway…

Male #1:

Look all I’m saying is that I don’t see why you’re not letting Faith go to the party; I can’t exactly say to her that she isn’t welcome!



Female #1:

 Oh, well make up another excuse…



Male #1:

 Like what?....  I can’t just lie to her, it’ll be obvious! She knows that you don’t like her anyway!

Male #2:

All the more reason for her not to come…

Male #1:

Jesus, I can’t believe you guys… are you really that shallow?

Female #1:

 James, don’t be melodramatic… We appreciate she’s your girlfriend and all but quite frankly she’s an arrogant, selfish, Greedy…

Male #2:

 …What she’s trying to say is that we don’t really think she’s that nice a person.

Male #1:

 oh… brilliant... that’s makes it all the more better doesn’t it?

Friends ramble on in background, where we turn to Male #3, standing on one of the platforms overlooking the view of Nyman’s gardens… He’s trembling, nervous as if something horrific is about to happen… Male #1 catches Male #3 out of the corner of his eye and recognises him…the 3 friends stop and spot Male #3.

Male #1:

Hey I know that guy….

Male #1 tries to catch his attention…

Male #1:

 (Shouts name of Male #3)

Max looks at him for a very brief second in horror almost, but it’s a short meeting as we hear one shot of gunfire and Max falls to the ground…dead.

Male #1:

 oh my god!

The 3 friends rush over to him… James crouches down to inspect the body whilst Amy and Perry stand back…

Male #1:

well what are you waiting for??? Call an ambulance!

As Male #2 calls the ambulance in the background Male #1 notices a sparkle in Male #3’s Hand, he opens the hand… it’s a necklace… James looks at it in suspicion…



CUT TO BLACK---END OF OPENING

                      
                           

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